Sunday, January 22, 2012
Sorry!
So, I realized that on my link to my fanfiction page it does not work so if you want to get on it here is the link on Fanfiction!
Fanfiction friday!
Hey guys! I have been writing a fanfiction of warriors and I would like to share it on here too! If you have not read the warrior series this may not make sense, if you would like to read this I would be glad! :) Enjoy!
Allegiances
Sunclan
Leader- Stormstar- Strong gray tom
Deputy- Sliverheart- Light gray she- cat
Warriors-
Brightflame- Bright orange tom – mentor to Graypaw
Sablestrom- calico she- cat with green eyes who is kind and hyper- mentor to Lightpaw
Honeyspots - pretty golden she-cat with amber eyes
Lionstreak- strong golden brown and orange tom
Shimmerstorm- bright silver she- cat with blue eyes
Spottedtail- Brown, black, and orange spotted tom- mentor to Firepaw
Apprentices
Graypaw- Gray tom
Lightpaw- White she- cat
Firepaw- Red tom
Moonshade- Black she-cat
Queens-
Shimmersky- calm gray she- cat
Whispereyes- white she- cat
Elders-
Longmouth- old gray tom with a long mouth
Mousewing- Short tempered orange she- cat
Moonclan
Leader- Soulstar- silver she- cat with bright blue eyes
Deputy- Poppyheart- Orange and brown tom
Warriors-
Blazeeyes- Strong orange tom- mentor to Mistpaw
Raventail- pure black slick tom
Brightwing- Orange she- cat- mentor to Blackpaw
Smallpool- small tabby she-cat
Apprentices
Heatherpaw- orange and brown tabby she- cat
Icepaw- white she-cat
Mistpaw- gray she- cat
Blackpaw- black tom
Queens- Lillypetal- light gray she-cat expecting Blazeeye's kits.
Elders- none
Lightningclan
Leader- Mothstar- black tom
Deputy- Nightshade- dark gray tom- mentor to Flamepaw
Warriors-
Hawkscar- Brown- and- black striped tom
Snowfur- White she- cat
Berrytail- Brown she- cat
Apprentices -
Flamepaw- Brave ginger tom
Queens- Icelilly- white calm she-cat
Elders- none
Chapter 1
Mistpaw sat patiently waiting to leave to her first gathering. It had only been a moon since she had become an actual apprentice and since then there had not been any gatherings. The moon had risen when Soulstar, the leader of their clan, had climbed to the top of Moon Rocks.
Mistpaw stood at the bottom while Soulstar called to the clan, "Let every cat old enough to catch their own prey gather here."
Heads raised up and bodies gathered close to Mistpaw. Soulstar opened her mouth again as she said, "As you know, tonight we have a gathering to go to. The clans have already gone but we must show our new comer how to behave at one." Soulstar said sarcastically.
Mistpaw rolled her eyes at her remarks, everyone knew how to act at their first gathering. Soulstar turned and climbed down the rocks. She led the way down to the small area were the gathering was held at full moon.
When they entered the clearing between all the clan's territories, the area looked so small. There were cats everywhere crawling around. When Soulstar took his place in the oak tree, the crowd went silent. Mothstar cleared his throat before speaking, "Lightningclan has had well hunting this past moon and we are counting on the same this future moon." he paused, "We recently have lost a warrior in a battle... Tigerpool now hunts with Starclan. That is all." He nodded to Stormstar.
"We too have had a well hunting moon. We have also had three more kits added to our clan. Shimmersky has introduced Treekit, Darkkit, and Snowkit. We have also had a new apprentice, Firepaw." Murmurs flooded the clearing before Soulstar turned to face the clans.
"We too have added an apprentice to our clan, Mistpaw has reached her sixth moon. That is all we have new in our clan." he ended.
Mothstar turned to the clans again and then added, "If that is all then the clans are free to share tongues." the leaders jumped down from their trees when the cats started to mingle together.
Mistpaw sat alone for a few heart beats until she turned around when a tom spoke, "You're Mistpaw right?" She froze and then finally nodded. "I'm Flamepaw- from Lightningclan".
"Um- Hi!" Mistpaw murmured awkwardly.
"How's hunting been in you're clan? Soulstar never comments on you're prey."
Suddenly feeling protective Mistpaw commented, "Just as good as anyone else! and why do you care how our clan is doing?"
Flamepaw's pelt bristled, but he then smoothed it back down after remembering he was at a gathering. "I was just curious. So is it true that Moonclan has a special connection to Starclan through one of its cats?"
Mistpaw tilted her head in confusion, "I haven't heard of that. I don't think so, but maybe..." she thought a moment and then shrugged.
"I heard it when I was just a kit. I always dreamed I had special powers or something." he lowered his head as if he was lost in a memory.
"You actually believe in nursery tales?" Mistpaw meowed playfully.
"Well, what did you hear when you were a kit, since that wasn't so long ago." he chuckled.
"I never listened to nursery tells, I was busy training myself to hunt!" she said braggingly.
"To hunt what, leaves?" he teased.
Mistpaw could almost feel her heart about to beat out of her chest from embarrassment. But there was something about him that made him different from the rest of the cats. His scent was sweet and comforting. She held the scent in her nose for a moment before saying, "Well I was just a kit, you have to remember." changing the subject she said, "How long before you can become a warrior?"
"Not that long, my final assessment is only a moon away!" He meowed with joy. "I still remember becoming an apprentice, I was so excited to see all the forest I could, and now... I will be a warrior!"
Mistpaw's heart filled with excitement for him. She couldn't wait until the day she became a warrior. Fear suddenly struck her, what if she had to fight him in battle. Would he hurt her or would she have to hurt him? She shook her head, they weren't even friends, they were in different clans. But something in her heart told her she needed him in her life to live. Was she falling in love with Flamepaw? She was only an apprentice and he was in a different clan for Starclan's sake!
"Well I should go, my clan is leaving! I guess I will see you at the next gathering!" Flamepaw turned away and headed for Lightningclan's camp. Mistpaw felt an emptiness inside her. She looked up at the rising sun and made a wish that she would see him again.
Soulstar climbed up a pile of rocks and shouted, "Moonclan! It is time to leave!" Then she hopped down. Poppyheart wondered around finding the rest of the clan. Mistpaw followed the clan out of the clearing, trying to leave all of her feelings behind. She could still smell Flamepaw's warm scent drifting through the wind.
"Are you okay?" Mistpaw jumped when she realized Blackpaw was talking to her. "You look worried."
Mistpaw stuttered out her words carefully, taking care not to mention Flamepaw, "Uh- yes! I'm fine!" She looked into Blackpaw's eyes trying to convince him that her lie was the truth.
"Well if you need anything just let me know, I am always her for you!" he smiled and trotted to where Brightwing was talking to Smallpool.
Mistpaw let her mind wander off to Flamepaw. She remembered everything he had said and how sweet his voice was. It was as if the world slowed down and she was the only one moving. For a second she was convinced that time had really slowed down but she shook her head thinking she was crazy to think such stupid things.
When the end of the day came Mistpaw was ready to fall asleep. She worked harder that day than she had in long time, the whole time she was trying to keep Flamepaw off of her mind but he somehow wandered back in.
When she made it into the Apprentice's den, she found Blackpaw's nest next to her's. Mistpaw rolled her tongue when her stomach curled at the thought of sleeping that close to Blackpaw. "Hey!" Blackpaw's familiar voice flooded her ears. "I was hoping you would come soon. I need to talk to you!"
Mistpaw froze, she hoped with all of her heart that he wouldn't say anything about him wanting her. "Okay," she finally breathed out.
"I know you're only an apprentice but I want to ask you something." Mistpaw sat down with her heart thudding for what seemed to be a tortuous moon until he finally said, "I think- I think- I think I love you!"
Mistpaw closed her eyes and prayed to Starclan that she was dreaming but when she opened her eyes she found that she was still sitting in front of the cat that loved her.
Blackpaw trotted over to her and sat down next to her. Mistpaw liked how his fur warmed her. She only wished that he was Flamepaw, but the reality of everything was that she could almost have a tom who loved her.
"Do you want to go for a walk?" He finally said after awhile.
"Sure!" Mistpaw meowed trying to answer his question. They both walked out of the den into the cool night air. They trotted over to a small pool under the moonlight and sat down, staring into it. Mistpaw felt peaceful for the first time since she had met Flamepaw. "It's very quiet". She said.
Blackpaw turned to look at her only to say, "That's why I came here." he moved closer to Mistpaw and licked her ear. "I know this is fast but I need to know-" he paused for only a heartbeat. "When we are both Warriors do you... want to be mine?" Mistpaw lost her breath and couldn't find anything to say.
Even though she was in the same clan as him, she still couldn't decide what she wanted. She knew she could not be with Flamepaw, so why couldn't she be with Blackpaw? She finally got out, "I guess so..."
Blackpaw let out a breath of excitement. He got up and left her alone by the pool. Mistpaw couldn't believe what had just happened. He loved her, but she didn't love him. Wishing that Starclan could have stopped him, she too got up and left the pool.
That was fast! She thought. It seemed that he was trying to rush it. She shrugged her shoulders, if only he had picked someone else!
On her way back to the den she looked up at the stars once again. She stopped breathing when millions of stars flashed through the sky. At that moment she felt her head spin, she lost her balance and fell to the ground her eyes shut and the last thing she saw was a glowing cat figure standing in front of her.
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Allegiances
Sunclan
Leader- Stormstar- Strong gray tom
Deputy- Sliverheart- Light gray she- cat
Warriors-
Brightflame- Bright orange tom – mentor to Graypaw
Sablestrom- calico she- cat with green eyes who is kind and hyper- mentor to Lightpaw
Honeyspots - pretty golden she-cat with amber eyes
Lionstreak- strong golden brown and orange tom
Shimmerstorm- bright silver she- cat with blue eyes
Spottedtail- Brown, black, and orange spotted tom- mentor to Firepaw
Apprentices
Graypaw- Gray tom
Lightpaw- White she- cat
Firepaw- Red tom
Moonshade- Black she-cat
Queens-
Shimmersky- calm gray she- cat
Whispereyes- white she- cat
Elders-
Longmouth- old gray tom with a long mouth
Mousewing- Short tempered orange she- cat
Moonclan
Leader- Soulstar- silver she- cat with bright blue eyes
Deputy- Poppyheart- Orange and brown tom
Warriors-
Blazeeyes- Strong orange tom- mentor to Mistpaw
Raventail- pure black slick tom
Brightwing- Orange she- cat- mentor to Blackpaw
Smallpool- small tabby she-cat
Apprentices
Heatherpaw- orange and brown tabby she- cat
Icepaw- white she-cat
Mistpaw- gray she- cat
Blackpaw- black tom
Queens- Lillypetal- light gray she-cat expecting Blazeeye's kits.
Elders- none
Lightningclan
Leader- Mothstar- black tom
Deputy- Nightshade- dark gray tom- mentor to Flamepaw
Warriors-
Hawkscar- Brown- and- black striped tom
Snowfur- White she- cat
Berrytail- Brown she- cat
Apprentices -
Flamepaw- Brave ginger tom
Queens- Icelilly- white calm she-cat
Elders- none
Chapter 1
Mistpaw sat patiently waiting to leave to her first gathering. It had only been a moon since she had become an actual apprentice and since then there had not been any gatherings. The moon had risen when Soulstar, the leader of their clan, had climbed to the top of Moon Rocks.
Mistpaw stood at the bottom while Soulstar called to the clan, "Let every cat old enough to catch their own prey gather here."
Heads raised up and bodies gathered close to Mistpaw. Soulstar opened her mouth again as she said, "As you know, tonight we have a gathering to go to. The clans have already gone but we must show our new comer how to behave at one." Soulstar said sarcastically.
Mistpaw rolled her eyes at her remarks, everyone knew how to act at their first gathering. Soulstar turned and climbed down the rocks. She led the way down to the small area were the gathering was held at full moon.
When they entered the clearing between all the clan's territories, the area looked so small. There were cats everywhere crawling around. When Soulstar took his place in the oak tree, the crowd went silent. Mothstar cleared his throat before speaking, "Lightningclan has had well hunting this past moon and we are counting on the same this future moon." he paused, "We recently have lost a warrior in a battle... Tigerpool now hunts with Starclan. That is all." He nodded to Stormstar.
"We too have had a well hunting moon. We have also had three more kits added to our clan. Shimmersky has introduced Treekit, Darkkit, and Snowkit. We have also had a new apprentice, Firepaw." Murmurs flooded the clearing before Soulstar turned to face the clans.
"We too have added an apprentice to our clan, Mistpaw has reached her sixth moon. That is all we have new in our clan." he ended.
Mothstar turned to the clans again and then added, "If that is all then the clans are free to share tongues." the leaders jumped down from their trees when the cats started to mingle together.
Mistpaw sat alone for a few heart beats until she turned around when a tom spoke, "You're Mistpaw right?" She froze and then finally nodded. "I'm Flamepaw- from Lightningclan".
"Um- Hi!" Mistpaw murmured awkwardly.
"How's hunting been in you're clan? Soulstar never comments on you're prey."
Suddenly feeling protective Mistpaw commented, "Just as good as anyone else! and why do you care how our clan is doing?"
Flamepaw's pelt bristled, but he then smoothed it back down after remembering he was at a gathering. "I was just curious. So is it true that Moonclan has a special connection to Starclan through one of its cats?"
Mistpaw tilted her head in confusion, "I haven't heard of that. I don't think so, but maybe..." she thought a moment and then shrugged.
"I heard it when I was just a kit. I always dreamed I had special powers or something." he lowered his head as if he was lost in a memory.
"You actually believe in nursery tales?" Mistpaw meowed playfully.
"Well, what did you hear when you were a kit, since that wasn't so long ago." he chuckled.
"I never listened to nursery tells, I was busy training myself to hunt!" she said braggingly.
"To hunt what, leaves?" he teased.
Mistpaw could almost feel her heart about to beat out of her chest from embarrassment. But there was something about him that made him different from the rest of the cats. His scent was sweet and comforting. She held the scent in her nose for a moment before saying, "Well I was just a kit, you have to remember." changing the subject she said, "How long before you can become a warrior?"
"Not that long, my final assessment is only a moon away!" He meowed with joy. "I still remember becoming an apprentice, I was so excited to see all the forest I could, and now... I will be a warrior!"
Mistpaw's heart filled with excitement for him. She couldn't wait until the day she became a warrior. Fear suddenly struck her, what if she had to fight him in battle. Would he hurt her or would she have to hurt him? She shook her head, they weren't even friends, they were in different clans. But something in her heart told her she needed him in her life to live. Was she falling in love with Flamepaw? She was only an apprentice and he was in a different clan for Starclan's sake!
"Well I should go, my clan is leaving! I guess I will see you at the next gathering!" Flamepaw turned away and headed for Lightningclan's camp. Mistpaw felt an emptiness inside her. She looked up at the rising sun and made a wish that she would see him again.
Soulstar climbed up a pile of rocks and shouted, "Moonclan! It is time to leave!" Then she hopped down. Poppyheart wondered around finding the rest of the clan. Mistpaw followed the clan out of the clearing, trying to leave all of her feelings behind. She could still smell Flamepaw's warm scent drifting through the wind.
"Are you okay?" Mistpaw jumped when she realized Blackpaw was talking to her. "You look worried."
Mistpaw stuttered out her words carefully, taking care not to mention Flamepaw, "Uh- yes! I'm fine!" She looked into Blackpaw's eyes trying to convince him that her lie was the truth.
"Well if you need anything just let me know, I am always her for you!" he smiled and trotted to where Brightwing was talking to Smallpool.
Mistpaw let her mind wander off to Flamepaw. She remembered everything he had said and how sweet his voice was. It was as if the world slowed down and she was the only one moving. For a second she was convinced that time had really slowed down but she shook her head thinking she was crazy to think such stupid things.
When the end of the day came Mistpaw was ready to fall asleep. She worked harder that day than she had in long time, the whole time she was trying to keep Flamepaw off of her mind but he somehow wandered back in.
When she made it into the Apprentice's den, she found Blackpaw's nest next to her's. Mistpaw rolled her tongue when her stomach curled at the thought of sleeping that close to Blackpaw. "Hey!" Blackpaw's familiar voice flooded her ears. "I was hoping you would come soon. I need to talk to you!"
Mistpaw froze, she hoped with all of her heart that he wouldn't say anything about him wanting her. "Okay," she finally breathed out.
"I know you're only an apprentice but I want to ask you something." Mistpaw sat down with her heart thudding for what seemed to be a tortuous moon until he finally said, "I think- I think- I think I love you!"
Mistpaw closed her eyes and prayed to Starclan that she was dreaming but when she opened her eyes she found that she was still sitting in front of the cat that loved her.
Blackpaw trotted over to her and sat down next to her. Mistpaw liked how his fur warmed her. She only wished that he was Flamepaw, but the reality of everything was that she could almost have a tom who loved her.
"Do you want to go for a walk?" He finally said after awhile.
"Sure!" Mistpaw meowed trying to answer his question. They both walked out of the den into the cool night air. They trotted over to a small pool under the moonlight and sat down, staring into it. Mistpaw felt peaceful for the first time since she had met Flamepaw. "It's very quiet". She said.
Blackpaw turned to look at her only to say, "That's why I came here." he moved closer to Mistpaw and licked her ear. "I know this is fast but I need to know-" he paused for only a heartbeat. "When we are both Warriors do you... want to be mine?" Mistpaw lost her breath and couldn't find anything to say.
Even though she was in the same clan as him, she still couldn't decide what she wanted. She knew she could not be with Flamepaw, so why couldn't she be with Blackpaw? She finally got out, "I guess so..."
Blackpaw let out a breath of excitement. He got up and left her alone by the pool. Mistpaw couldn't believe what had just happened. He loved her, but she didn't love him. Wishing that Starclan could have stopped him, she too got up and left the pool.
That was fast! She thought. It seemed that he was trying to rush it. She shrugged her shoulders, if only he had picked someone else!
On her way back to the den she looked up at the stars once again. She stopped breathing when millions of stars flashed through the sky. At that moment she felt her head spin, she lost her balance and fell to the ground her eyes shut and the last thing she saw was a glowing cat figure standing in front of her.
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Book I'm looking forward to
The end of the stars draws near. Three must become four to battle the darkness that lasts forever...
After countless moons of treachery, Tigerstar's Dark Forest apprentices are ready to lay siege upon the warrior Clans. As the Clan cats seek out their allies and enemies, Jayfeather, Lionblaze & Dovewing search desperately for the fourth cat who is prophesied to lead the Clans to victory - and who may be their only hope for survival.
Expected publication: December 8th 2012 by HarperCollins Canada / Warriors
Thursday, November 24, 2011
Review of Warriors- Omen of the Stars- Sign Of the Moon
After the sharp-eyed Jay and the roaring Lion, peace will come on Dove's gentle wing.The deadly battle between ThunderClan and ShadowClan is over, but the aftermath still echoes around all four Clans. As Dovepaw grapples with the knowledge that there are realms—and cats—her senses cannot reach, Jayfeather and Lionblaze are determined to figure out how StarClan could have allowed this fight to happen. Jayfeather soon finds the answer in the darkest of places, and he and Lionblaze prepare to do whatever they can to staunch the flow of evil into ThunderClan.
The ties that bind the Clans are slowly breaking in the face of the greatest threat that the warriors—and the warrior code—have ever known. As leaf-bare closes its grip upon the territories, Jayfeather, Lionblaze, and Dovepaw realize just how close the battle is, and how far they are from being able to succeed. And before the prey can run again, one more cat will be lost to the fight.
I have read all of the warriors books out so far and I have gotten hooked! This one is the third book in the fourth series, if you want to read this one you would want to start at the very beginning of the warriors books. This one I thought was amazing! You can tell that Erin Hunter has been writing for years!!!! I have never seen a grammar error in the books and I think that it is very fantastic! I would give this five stars!
Review of Santa Maybe
With a successful bakery to run, super cute nieces and nephews to spoil, and plenty of good friends to keep her company, Abbie's not about to start crying over the fact that she s doesn't have a boyfriend to spend Christmas with. But when her sister convinces her to write a note to Santa, Abbie has no idea that a little Christmas magic is about to land her the man of her dreams. Or rather, that man is about to land smack dab on the floor in front of her Christmas tree with no memory of how he got there.Now Abbie and Ben have to figure out where he came from, who he really is, and if he's actually available.
Aubrey Mace, the award-winning author of Spare Change, has done it again! This light-hearted holiday romance is sure to please even the most cynical scrooge. Told with humor, sweetness, and Aubrey's signature wit, this is one Christmas story that will keep you smiling all year round.
This book was really great to read for me. I have been in a mood for a love story and a holiday book and I got both in this one! I think that it could have a bit more description, because there were a few times that I could not understand what was going on, but For the most part she did a really good job at explaining what she was wanting you to get from the book! I don't think that you could do any better at writing this book as Aubrey Mace did. I would give it three and a half stars.
Review of Paint the Wind
Maya is a captive. In Grandmother's house in California, every word and action is strictly monitored, and even Maya's memories of her mother have been erased--except within the imaginary world she has created. A world away, in the rugged Wyoming wilderness, a tobiano Paint horse called Artemisia runs free, belonging only to the stars. She embodies the spirit of the wild--and she holds the key to Maya's memories. How Maya's and Artemisia's lives intertwine, like a braided rein is at the heart of this richly drawn adventure about captivity and freedom, about holding on and letting go.I really liked this book, because it was a story of hope and courage. I really liked how they were able to create the scenery of Wyoming. When I first read this book I sat reading it straight threw for hours! I've read it several times and it is still exciting every time that I've read it. I would highly recommend it for anyone who enjoy books on adventure, horses, and survival! I would give this 4 stars! :)
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